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Your Inspirational Icon - Intermediate Essay 6

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Life can be hard or easy for us. People need inspiration in their lives to overcome difficult times. We can draw inspiration from different kinds of sources, such as a random person, a non-human living thing, a story, a natural entity, etc. Many of us will have a person as our inspirational icons in our lives. In this essay, I would like to discuss the role of an inspirational icon in a person's life, different kinds of inspirational sources of people, and my own inspirational icon. As a matter of fact, life can always be smooth and easy for us. We have to face hardships at different points in time. Not getting disappointed is vital to move forward in life. We need to stay hopeful amidst failure. There are many people around us who commit suicide when they face difficulty. The role of an inspirational icon is beneficial in the lives of such people. The success stories of inspirational icons will encourage people to stay positive. Interestingly, people draw inspiration from differe...

Medical Documentation Proofreading Example 13

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Proofreading Ms. Brenda is a 69-year-old lady who presented for the hospital with chest pain or respiratory  insufficiency. She had chronic lung disease wit bronchospastic angina. We discovered new T-wave  abnormalities in her EKG. She has undergone a four-vessel bypass surgeries in 2001. We did a  coronary Angiogram. This demonstrated patent vein grafts and patent intern mammary vessel, and  there was no obvious knew disease. She may continue in the future to has angina and she will have  nitroglycerin available for that if needed. Her blood pressure has been elevated. So, instead of  metoprolol, we have started her on Coreg 6.25 mg bid. This should be increased upto 25 mg b.i.d. as  the prefferred anti hypertensive in this ladies case. She is on a ACE inhibitor. I would see her in a  month to six weeks. He is to follow up with Dr. Timothy prior to that. Answer Ms. Brenda is a 69-year-old lady who presented to the hospital with chest pain and r...

Should the death penalty be given to rapists? Intermediate Essay 5

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Several types of crimes are happening around the world. All countries have their own legal systems to punish those who commit crimes. In many countries, the death penalty is the biggest form of punishment for a crime. The death penalty will be given only to those who commit serious crimes. People all around the world are arguing over whether the death penalty should be given to rapists. I agree that rapists deserve the death penalty. In this essay, I will explain why rapists should be killed.   A rapist is a person who assaults another person sexually. Nowadays, we hear a lot of news about rapes and sexual abuses around the world. I believe that rapes are increasing because rapists are not punished properly. Rape is a type of crime that cannot be justified under any circumstances. There are people who steal money or food because they have nothing to eat or sustain their lives. However, rape is not like them; instead, it is a pure crime that needs proper retribution . The studie...

Should smoking be banned? Intermediate Essay 4

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People have different habits and hobbies for recreation. Smoking is one of the most common habits among people across the world. The studies show that three out of every ten people in the world smoke. Nowadays, not only adults but also minors smoke cigarettes. New-generation people see smoking as a fashion trend among them. People now smoke not only tobacco substances but also serious narcotics . In this short piece of writing, I would like to shed light on the consequences of smoking and remedies for the uncontrollable smoking habit, as well as my personal experience. Let us begin with the consequences of smoking. It is a proven fact that regular smoking causes cancer. Similarly, it causes serious respiratory and lung diseases. The studies show that smoking causes sexual dysfunction. To mention a mild one, smokers develop a foul odor that repulses people. Furthermore, their lips darken, and their teeth become stained. Unfortunately, smoking affects innocent people too. People who in...

Medical Transcription Audio & SOAP Report 2

What follows is a medical transcription report of a doctor-patient clinic-visit conversation. The YouTube video below will play the transcription audio. You need to open your typing software, then play the audio, and then take down what you hear. Once finished, you can check out the original transcription below and see if they match up. Fargoz United Health Care Specialty: Allergy/Immunology Date: January 2, 2024 Doctor: Mr. Fargoz Patient's name: Mr. Tom Patient's ID: fgu123457

Medical Transcription Audio & SOAP Report 1

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What follows is a medical transcription report of a doctor-patient clinic-visit conversation. The YouTube video below will play the transcription audio. You need to open your typing software, then play the audio, and then take down what you hear. Once finished, you can check out the original transcription below and see if they match up. Fargoz United Health Care Specialty: Allergy/Immunology Date: January 1, 2024 Doctor: Mr. Fargoz Patient's name: Mr. Robert Patient's ID: fgu123456

Medical Documentation Proofreading Example 12

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Proofreading The patient is a 40-year-old female with past medical history from repair of deviated septum by  complication of a Septal perforation. At that time, the patient says that her septal perforation  bother her as she feels that she has very dry air trough her nose as well as occasional epistaxis.  At this time I counselled the patient on the risks and benefits of surgery. She will consider surgery  but at this time, she will like two continue using the saline nasal wash as well as occasional  Bactroban to the nose if there are occasional irritation and crusting which she will apply with the  edge of an Q-tip. We will see her back in three weeks. If the patient does not feel releived from  the Bactroban as well as saline nasalspray wash, we will consider setting the patients for surgery  at this time. Answer The patient is a 40-year-old female with a past medical history of repair of deviated septum with complication of a septal perfo...